Hi itz me.

I've mad some new drawings!!!!!.But...there is something about theme.I cant make them to seam real.Its like there toys.Knightvison nice worke with the new drawing.The colors are nice.I like to make that ilusion when you let a withe space as if its glowing.And want someone give me some tips critics something. These are the new cars:
http://img239.exs.cx/img239/1246/ferrary0010cq.jpg
http://img114.exs.cx/img114/7091/jaguar0012aw.jpg

Your problem is that you have your proportions going into a million different directions. use some reference from photos to get an idea of how the perspective should be.

Hmm. Your last drawing was better. the ferrari, which looks a bit like a Porsche to me, is ok, but the Jaguar is drawn from the front view and the side view at the same time. That's impossible.
Try to get some pictures of the same cars with different angles. Now compare them and you'll see that in one perspective, you have to leave something away, just because you can't see it. You know it is there, from yourother picture, but you can't see it. So you don't have to draw it.
Or you better go out and walk to a parked car. Go around it and look how some parts disappear and others appear in your view. I did that too, no joke. Helps a lot.

Oh and please, please post your next drawings in the "Completed and In-Progress Projects"-Section.

oops, try to have a reference pic.

refrence pics are a must when it comes to drawing real cars. perspectiveis one of the tougher aspects of drawing to learn but once you understand it. your drawings will improve greatly.
im not sure I understand what you were refering to when you spoke of a glowing white space? are you refering to reflections?