New Racing Story

Well here is a tentative car list. First three characters and BRIEF descriptions. As far as the cars go, my story will pay alotof attention to what the driver does to their car and how they use it and/or abuse it. Also the people behind(inside) the cars will be getting a different aspect as their ambitions are clear enough and effect their actions, racing styles, and car choice. You can almost guess what kind of car each guy wants to move on to just by seeing where they want to be in life.


Mark-1994 Toyota Celica GT-4.
Main character. True devoted car enthusiast. Wants nothing more than to race, possibly F1 but more favorably WRC. Loves 4-wheel drive cars, and has had his GT-4 since he got his liscense. When it comes to racing, he's really unpredictable.

Al-1998 Nissan 240SX w/SR20DET
Major Character. Really only pays attention to the street scene.Wants to open tuning shop. Enjoys flaunting his speed.

Michael-1998 Nissan 240SX w/KA24-T
Major Character. Al's best friend. Really prefers much more of a sleeper look. He also has a much wider view of tuing than anyone else. Wants to be a pro driver of some kind.

so were are you going with this? it sounds interesting

but when and were is the story?

a fictional story eh?

Hmm, so far we got a main character, 2 major charactors, 3 cars, no race, no plot, and NO GIRL? Who gets da girl?

haha sounds like it has potential, go for it man!

Lol, i am already interested just on what lil i have read from the character description

could he have possibly maybe forgotten to write about the race after he wrote all those character descriptions? :rofl:

possibly.. an what's up with the 240sx? why no 300's?!?

You forgot the Best Character:

CivRacer: 1995 Honda Civic EX Coupe
Too much for the other 3. They envy him day in and day out. They are no match for him :smokin: . Celica GT-What? SR20 Huh? KA Doesn't Matter-T. They are still in envy of the SOHC tightly packed under the hood of his Civic. :loser: . Late...

good umm well i can't say story cause there isn't one so um yea..... *thinks of somthing nice to say*

kick ass shoes dude are they pumas?

good.. are u going to make a movie too? an underground movie..lol..you could prob make some nice $$

hey what me

Pat-1998 Ford Mustang
The head honcho/The Big Boss
His unpredictable moves while racing his 3.8L fuel-injected yellow Mustang is enough to grant him many triumphant victories over his 4-cyl brethan. Known to have a rare case of bullshittitus...Bitter rivals with the bastid officially known as Dampachi, And Offical leader of NSR who seek global domination of the streets

I'd like to see more than 3 characters, and I'd like to see were its going. But thats just me, good start.

hey what me

Pat-1998 Ford Mustang
The head honcho/The Big Boss
His unpredictable moves while racing his 3.8L fuel-injected yellow Mustang is enough to grant him many triumphant victories over his 4-cyl brethan. Known to have a rare case of bullshittitus...Bitter rivals with the bastid officially known as Dampachi, And Offical leader of NSR who seek global domination of the streets

:grinno: i love this kid

Those were just the first three characters, and im building the story up bit by bit. firsty i want to have people and cars to with them.
More characters.

Ashley-2003 BMW M3
Major Character. Will drive/race anything fast that she can get her hands on. Loves BMW's a lot and a true beliver of German Engineering Superiority.

Justin-1985 Mazda RX-7
Major Character-Mark's Father. A true technical driver and loves a difficult road to drive on. He causes drivers to make mistakes by his pestering pass attempts. Only wants his son to evolve into a better driver and person.

Rachael-2004 Dodge Neon SRT-4
Major Character-A lover of "Detroit Muscle" with respect for the import scene becase she realizes she basically drives one. Is always ready to challenge Mark and shares his dream to be a F1 driver.

Okay, the story takes place in a made up city in California i call "Pacific City". It has a down town area, a mountain area, behing the mountain in the desert there is a race complex with 1/4 and a full racing course ,and before you get to the mountain there is a backwoods area. I thought these 3 areas would be perfect for all sorts of racing and diverse cars.

Ashley-2003 BMW M3
Major Character. Will drive/race anything fast that she can get her hands on.

She can drive me anyday :biggrin: . Sounds like the story is picking up more and more. I thinks it's pretty cool that you included the city name, a location in Cali (a great place to be) and 3 race scenes. I'd move their anyday. Can't wait to hear how it sounds. This could even turn into some sort of comic strip had you found yourself some sort of artist. I can do cartoons if your interested. Late...

Come on man, throw some domestics in there. And damn..I'm rivals with some kid with a 6cyl mustang? Damn. We're cool, detroitmuscle/burntrice/pat...as long as you don't talk too much shit and you keep your drool off my GT. :)


Edit: I noticed you do have a domestic...the SRT-4...but what I mean is throw some muscle in there.

Me likey Ashley...girl has taste.

Been forever but I finally have a plot line assembled.

Mark is struggling in life, he was booted from his F3000 gig after a spotty season littered with DNF's. Even though he shows potential, the team has to let him go.

He decides it's time to go back home, Pacific City, California. Upon his return, he reunites with his best-frineds, Al and Mark, and his Ex-Girlfriend Ashley. He also returns to his old car, a 94 Celica GT-4. Jobless and living with his parents again, he comes back on the scene. at first it's just the stop-light grand prix, but then he returns to his old stomping ground, Mt. Aprisa.

Little by little, he regains his former racing prowless. At nights, he endlessly attacks the mountain, desperately trying to better his skills and reflexes. He becomes more in tune with his car and the track than ever. It is one of these nights where the first major chase/race sceen happens. Locked in a duel with a RX-7, he proves to himself that he does STILL have it. After beating the the FC, he is shocked to see the driver, his father

With his daylife improving. getting a job and place of his own, he spends mre and more time on the mountain. He has run-ins with several drivers and cars. Eventually, he conquers the mountain run. He then starts to race the narrow, winding back-country roads. It is there where it happens, he crashes, this time not just the car, but his whole life comes crashing down.

In the meantime, Al, Michael, and Racheal get involved in a race war. But they are on different sides.

Can Mark recover? Who's side will he chose? Now that the Celica is trahsed, what car will he drive?

Not even I know.

How about we call it 3 fast 3 furious, that would be a good name. Heres some new characters.

Moses- Drives an Impala SS with NOS. His part will be played by Snoop Dogg. He races for the Ladies, but he loves to roll slow.

Danny(aka 40Cent)- Drives a 1983 Civic with american racing rims, an aluminum wing, and a zebra steering wheel cover. It also has full APC bolt ons. He swears he is the real slim shady. What he lacks in power he matches in style.

Good luck with that.

Vin Petrol- He lives his life a quartermile at a time. He dosn't take anyones shit, he also realizes that its not how you stand by your car...its how you drive it.

Then they are all brutally beaten to death with fart cans, bottles of NAWZ, and neon ripped off of their own cars. The End.

Then they are all brutally beaten to death with fart cans, bottles of NAWZ, and neon ripped off of their own cars. The End.

Good Kill! :chair: hahaha

Overall I'd have to admit this is a rather interesting story you got here. What are you writing this for anyways? Just for fun? School? Either way keep this story updated and good luck.

Good Kill! :chair: hahaha

Overall I'd have to admit this is a rather interesting story you got here. What are you writing this for anyways? Just for fun? School? Either way keep this story updated and good luck.
this is just for fun