Wrexy

Slightly Cartooned.
Modified from a 4 to 2 door.
Didn't take too long. 5-10min from a picture in the newspaper.
Let me know what you think. It's not up to the calibre of some peoples
work but yeh.

http://img99.exs.cx/img99/9441/scan00048op.th.jpg (http://img99.exs.cx/my.php?loc=img99&image=scan00048op.jpg)

If I get any good feedback I might make a proper drawing out of it.
You know, make it look good.

ok. this is a good start. you can draw.

work on spacing of wheel spokes. the spacing is off. even cartoons must employ elements of technical correctness, as to not be distracting to the eye.

study reflections in glass and on car doors and hoods. get some dealer literature at the local subie showroom and have fun with it. study the light hitting the car.

embolden your lines a bit to be darker, and loosen up with your sketching using your entire arm. your drawing looks too
shaky and scratchy, revealing that you are too much in your wrist.

make future scans larger for us to see. :)

Are you sure you clicked the picture? It's pretty large when clicked.

oh. sorry. i didn't even bother! now that i clicked it, it is quite viewable.

Haha, no probs.

Here is a redone version.

Symmetry of wheels improved. The whole front bumper lowered to a better proportion. and yeh.

http://img152.exs.cx/img152/1507/scan00056sf.th.jpg (http://img152.exs.cx/my.php?loc=img152&image=scan00056sf.jpg)

Haha, no probs.

Here is a redone version.


yes. now we're talking. your lines are better, too.
next big step is rendering.

Looks cool. Your lines are solid, but shaky Als, remember to put this in the ight spot, and of coarse, always remember that toons are fun, so wheel symmetry or anyhting else doesn't really matter.

The second one is much better

Thanks for great feedback.

3rd Rendition.

Cleaned a bit. Coloured the black bits. Cartoony reflection on window.
http://img188.exs.cx/img188/6352/scan00065wm.th.jpg (http://img188.exs.cx/my.php?loc=img188&image=scan00065wm.jpg)

Plus another high quality pic
Go ahead, laugh.
http://img188.exs.cx/img188/2793/scan00042ey.th.jpg (http://img188.exs.cx/my.php?loc=img188&image=scan00042ey.jpg)

It's looking alot better from the 1st. Keep up the good work. Try shading it.

Alex