newbie can draw!!!

not bragging, really, but I found this forum and I have since re-kindled my passion for pencil art.

so here is my first real drawing in 7 years, it is a rough draft, but it is a start.

it is going to represent a model kit I purchased a while back, then when I get it all colored in and finnished I am going to build the kit as rendered in the drawing. please comment and be honest.
http://files.automotiveforums.com/gallery/watermark.php?file=500/235291veilside_S14-med.jpg

I recognized what it was without you labeling, so I guess thats a good start!

Rear end looks a tad bubbly though.

Newbie is cocky!

well it is a good line drawing.

but i see a couple of problems.
1. your first post in s/d and you say something cocky
2. you said something cocky and didn't back it up
3. you said something cocky
4. you do NOT talk about fight club. :smile:

please try not and get yourself ripped apart. please stay and enjoy this wonderful place. :smile:

hahaha, I love you guys too! :) I just made that statement to get attention, honestly. I know I can use improvement, that is why I like the brutal honesty of these forums. you all have such great renderings, I just wanna share mine and be as cocky as I can while doing it! hahaha! I also just finished my first ever KARTOON! I hope you all enjoy it, I know I had fun doing it, while playing YATZI (sp?)
http://files.automotiveforums.com/gallery/watermark.php?file=503/235291DORIFTO_S13-med.jpg

ahhhhh lined paper!!!! that drawing deserves white paper with no lines. you should trace it onto white paper then color it. i like the angle you chose.

Perspective is all wierd on the back.

And white paper > lined paper.

Tim, I think a time like this calls for a "NO LINED PAPER" announcement.

At least "No Wrinkly Lined Paper"

love the toon bro , very cool angle as well .I'll have to try that angle.Would like to see some more toons from ya ! :grinyes:

yeah, like I said though, I was playing yatzi and when it wasn't my turn I was doodling on the scorebook. I like how it turned out so I am going to do one up right on some real quality paper, using either colored pencil or water color markers.

by the way thanks for the comments, I was thinking the rear end of the S14 was kinda fat as well. I guess we will see how it turns out.

by the way 'TOONZ, what medium are you using to get the effect such as the image in your sig?

i think he uses corel painter for stuff like that.

What is this? Danny, Zach and Tyler all in the same day?

oh, I guess that is a computer program??? whatever it is, I like the sharpness of the colors and realistic blending and shading.

Ya, he uses a computer to do the final rendering.

I don't like enhancing my artwork in that manner. It makes me feel as if I am taking my own originality from myself. but it still looks freakin great!

BTW, Kustm, I love the cavalier you did for that lady's husband.

I don't like enhancing my artwork in that manner. It makes me feel as if I am taking my own originality from myself. but it still looks freakin great!

BTW, Kustm, I love the cavalier you did for that lady's husband.

Thanks, apparently she didnt though :(

yup , Like my bud kustom said ...I free hand draw then scan into mt puter then paint it with corel photo paint ..with the airbrush :)

Its a good start and nice toon.

What is this? Danny, Zach and Tyler all in the same day? Hey! Man! That's no fair. I never get any credit :( Haha. Just kiddin with ya. Nice start, it's a.....S14 right?

thanks for the input, guys!
I am searching for some quality paper to do a final rendering and color it. so far the stuff I like is kinda pricey and they don't sell it in single sheets so I need to sell some organs or something to get it on the right paper.

Hey! Man! That's no fair. I never get any credit :( Haha. Just kiddin with ya. Nice start, it's a.....S14 right?

There's a difference... you got BANNED :lol:

btw, whos next to come back, ross?

and the drawings... They look good. I like the toon.

Alex

Hey man, If I don't know why, It doesn't count!

Yeah, where is ross? Dead?