One of my new ones

Here it is also my first marker render
http://img150.exs.cx/img150/5374/dsc020114jv1wc.jpg

Need to practice perspective.

And in the wrong place....

You've got the idea, my man- go for it!

But loosen up a bit, it will make your renderings more attractive.

You're showing some skill in decent perspective work, decent knowledge of reflections, and decent hand skills. Keep up the good work.

BTW, Kustm....Ron White is one hilarious dude, yes?

Could someone tell me where Im off in my perspective?

Your front rises up too much, and looks twisted, your windows are stretched, wheels are too small, The front seems to want to go in to different directions...

It's the wheels!
it's always the wheels/tires.

Also, the grille- its converging, instead of diverging. It's all pretty subtle, really.

Also, the hood "halves" (as separated by the crown down the middle)- the half in the background is wider than the half in the foreground.

The windshield looks nice, and the trailing edge of the roof-

Anyway, i'll shutup before I piss-off the Mod.

Seeya

Why would you piss off the mod?

Definately the wheels. You have to work on that.

Thanks for the comments guys.

BTW, Kustm....Ron White is one hilarious dude, yes?

:thumbsup:

red x for me

btw, who's ron white?

Lol, they won't tell us, Alex, we're too young to understamd:p

Give it up now:p

lOl You're pretty damn perceptive, HONU.........

He's just a middle-aged, slightly overweight, highball-drinkin, cigarette smokin' Texan- who also happens to be a great comedian. And, yeah, you probably do have to be a little older to appreciate his style.

Alright. At least you help out, unlike some people...*cough*Kustm*cough*









:p JK man. Thanks though.

...so thats where the hilarious custom title came from, right Tim? btw it wasnt a lucky guess, i googled it up and found out it was the title of one of his movies or something. before I searched it I thought that ron white might have something to do with ron jeremy, and thats why you wouldnt tell me :lol:

and i can see the drawing now. looks pretty good. I like the reflections, but work on the overall perspective and evenly spacing your wheels

Alex

the rendering is pretty nice,



and now that the thred is hi-jacked
go rent Blue Collar Comedy Tour!