Please give comments!!!!

Hello,

I have been drawing for 9 months constantly and I need to work on my shading and perspective. I just have the basic lines part of car, I need help on detail, Rims,and shading. This is why I am asking the pros, you all can tell me what I need to work on.

Thank You.

http://files.automotiveforums.com/gallery/watermark.php?file=/503/275105TopFuel-med.jpg
http://files.automotiveforums.com/gallery/watermark.php?file=/503/275105Supra-med.jpg

1. This is in the wrong section

2. Your lines are smooth, which is a +
3. You car is boxyish -
4. I can make out which cars your drawing +
5. Spoilers are over-exagerated, unless this is a cartoon -/+ depending

Anything else guys? I know there's lots, but I'm tired...

If I want to ask questions on art I've done, which forum would i post in ??

The one that says Completed and In Progress....at the top of your page...

Dont worry about it, I put it in the right place for ya. The drawings look nice. Id like to see some shading though.:smile:

Not bad. I think HONU has covered everything pretty much. Watch out for the ellipses, they're a little bit off on both drawings.

Alex

Thats a supra isnt it, like highoctane said its very boxyish, so try to make your curves more curved.

Good start, work on the stuff that HONU said is a - point.

the rooftop of the supra has to be lower i think.

Hehe...It was a new marking system. Any C+C on it....Wait, I did it again...= -...

This is bad:(