first sketch!

http://home.comcast.net/~nelbetchar/Porsche_911.jpg

critisize me! :nono: :nono: :nono:

Hey, that looks pretty good. All I would focus on is your lights and darks. Darken the insides of the wheels, the front bumper, the shadow underneath the vehicle, etc. It will make the drawing stand out much more, giving it a more photo-realistic look.

Is that your signature at the bottom of the drawing? That looks pretty cool

From what I can see that is a good drawing. As said above darken your drawings. Also smooth out your shading. Your rims need work, but many car drawers have trouble with them. Yours look like they are made out of paper. Keep up the good work!

I cant really see it. Try and darken it up

I cant really see it. Try and darken it up

Try using darker pencils for the contrast (4-9b). Also, use a tortillon to smooth the shading, if you haven't got one of those, use a tissue, and check out the sticky threads for info on elipses. Not bad though perspectively, and im sure you can easily improve you shading.

thanks everybody,
but whats a tortillon?

Use a tissue then if you don't know. Its a pencil shaped thing to help smooth your drawings out.

ok thanks

file:///D:/Caleb's%20Cars%20and%20trucks/2006-10-06,%20CAR%20DRAWINGS%20OF%202006!!!/CAR%20DRAWINGS%20OF%202006!!!%20032.jpg

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it kind da blur man but it's good any way