350z sketch /drawing in prog?

well hers a 350z .. havnt posted in a while. well it kinda is... doesnt really look like it anymore eh? lol. well...not sure if i shuld keep going so just askin for sum crit and suggestions. and if bonzelite remembers he told me to concentrate on the body thus the lack of wheels. =). so here goes.

http://files.automotiveforums.com/gallery/watermark.php?file=/500/192572350z-med.jpg

aequirco, i remember. work on cleaning up your sketch lines. make bold, sweeping strokes with your whole arm. not wrist.

examine the slope of the roof towards the back. it looks a bit funny.

so far it is ok.

You should keep going! Its pretty good perspectively. You should try shading it.

aequrico,

Not bad at all. Try shading it... its good practice.

Right now, there are a few things I see. Bonz mentioned the back of the roof. Also, you have no roof. The windshield and side windows should not extend that high.

The front and back both look a little short, and the wheelbase too long. A simple solution: bring the wheels closer together.

One more thing: watch out where the door connects to. It should be connected to the inside of the a pillar and the outside of the b pillar. In your drawing, the door lines lead to nowhere.

Otherwise, good job. Just a few changes.

Alex

thanx alex. i wasnt sure what i needed to fix... meh no roof lol... i never thought about that.. pillars.. ah right. lol..

cheers guys