first post of cars 2 Supras, 1 Skyline, 1 300zx

i have been drawing cars for 2-3 years or something but i never found this forum. i also have a lot of cars i designed but i dont wanna post em. here is some pics.

Supra
http://files.automotiveforums.com/gallery/watermark.php?file=/503/197744supra-med.JPG

300zx
http://files.automotiveforums.com/gallery/watermark.php?file=/503/197744300zx_WEB-med.jpg

Skyline
http://files.automotiveforums.com/gallery/watermark.php?file=/503/197744Skyline_WEB-med.jpg

Supra(first drawing from an angle)
http://files.automotiveforums.com/gallery/watermark.php?file=/503/197744supra_front_quarter-med.JPG

the pics are really blurry probably cuz they are done in pencil and not that dark.

they look good from what i can see, but a suggestion would be not to draw on line paper but on normal white blank paper. Also, shade your drawings. The side views look great good job!

bump up the contrast. it ain't hard to do that. aside from the shytty scans you did, which piss me off because i see it yet again, you are one talented muthrfker.

skyline's tires a bit too small.

second car's rear, the c-pillar area with wheel, too far back.

last car: view is good but car is too long. wheelbase is as long as an aircraft carrier. ellipses are a tad awkward for the angle you have chosen. that is a supra? excellent front fascia. rear is like what the fk.

but don't worry about this stuff. it is just a bit of time and tweaking and you're there. you draw really well. i'm serious. show us more.

oh. for the record, the paper is fine. the lightness of the drawings on that paper: not fine. the rule lines overpower the car. fix that.

how do i make them not so blurry? contrast only makes it brighter.

and they arent scans. my scanner makes the files huge and then wen i prep em for the internet they are worse than these. i just took the pics with my digi-cam(its also faster with the digi-cam :p ).

crop the image down. get rid of lots of white border = file size shrinks.

scan at 50dpi = file size shrinks.

open in p-shop, image adjust brightness/contrast = darker lines, cleaner whyte space.

ok thanks... ill go try that now.

here we go. some more clear pics:
supra
http://files.automotiveforums.com/gallery/watermark.php?file=/503/197744supra2.jpg

300zx
http://files.automotiveforums.com/gallery/watermark.php?file=/503/197744300zx.jpg

skyline
http://files.automotiveforums.com/gallery/watermark.php?file=/503/197744scan.jpg

supra angle
http://files.automotiveforums.com/gallery/watermark.php?file=/503/197744supra_angle.jpg

the supra from the angle still need rims and the wing on the skyline needs work.

I really like the 300zx, very clean and acurrate. Also the front of the supra is wicked good, but the body is a little long and twisted. Very good nonetheless

there is supposed to be an intercooler in the 2nd supra but it didnt show up. here is what the cars are supposed to be:

1st supra - bomex supra with... other stuff

300zx - random stuff(i dont remember if i designed the body kit or not)

skyline - bomex side skirts and front, stock-ish rear

2nd supra - bomex(like the one in the fast and the furious)