New Drawings
5uPrA RyDa
08-09-2004, 06:16 PM
here are some new drawings i did over the week, i did a concept a eclipse with no ref pic, and a rsx cartoon , Enjoy!! :naughty:
http://img46.exs.cx/img46/6475/concept2312.jpg
http://img70.exs.cx/img70/4302/eee.jpg
http://img3.exs.cx/img3/5416/rsxcartoon.jpg
oh im gonna try to clean up my lines and darken my black spaces! :banghead:
http://img46.exs.cx/img46/6475/concept2312.jpg
http://img70.exs.cx/img70/4302/eee.jpg
http://img3.exs.cx/img3/5416/rsxcartoon.jpg
oh im gonna try to clean up my lines and darken my black spaces! :banghead:
lemorris
08-10-2004, 12:14 AM
I don't know if you have a light box or tracing paper but if you do you can take all of these drawings to a higher place.
Being a little more careful on your wheels before you darken them will serve you well.
You have made much progress over the past few months. Keep it up!!
-Lemorris
Being a little more careful on your wheels before you darken them will serve you well.
You have made much progress over the past few months. Keep it up!!
-Lemorris
bonzelite
08-10-2004, 04:24 AM
you're the kartoon master, lemorris. i'll defer this to you.
supra, you are talented but very raw. clean up your act and you are miles farther ahead.
supra, you are talented but very raw. clean up your act and you are miles farther ahead.
Ra_15
08-10-2004, 04:05 PM
They look good, but like Lee and Bonz said, you need to clean up your lines more.
mike@af
08-10-2004, 05:21 PM
More shading variations needed.
stuffbyalex
08-10-2004, 05:38 PM
pretty good. ur gettin better each time.
Here are some things to change: more contrast in the shading, as mike said. that means make the darker areas alot darker and the light areas lighter. get rid of alot of the midtones.
clean up the lines, because they look really really thick. or, try sharpening your pencils or get a mech.
spend more time! they look a little rushed
keep it up
Alex
Here are some things to change: more contrast in the shading, as mike said. that means make the darker areas alot darker and the light areas lighter. get rid of alot of the midtones.
clean up the lines, because they look really really thick. or, try sharpening your pencils or get a mech.
spend more time! they look a little rushed
keep it up
Alex
5uPrA RyDa
08-10-2004, 08:29 PM
thanks for the comments, ill take Mike's and Alex's advice on the shading.
oh yea i know they seem a bit rushed, i guess ill try to put more time in my drawings.
about the tracing paper, umm ill think about it
Isaac
oh yea i know they seem a bit rushed, i guess ill try to put more time in my drawings.
about the tracing paper, umm ill think about it
Isaac
asaenz
08-10-2004, 11:44 PM
I love that last toon, very sweet.
On the 2nd drawing:
Don't be afraid to let your ellipses run into/behind the body panels. I hope I am making sense. It seems you allowed the back edge of the bumper to dictate your tire/rim ellipses, let those run into the body panels. Draw them past your bumper line and then erase the part of the ellipses that is hidden by the bumper.
Well, I may be totally off on my recommendation because these are toons and rules don't apply, I think.
Great job
Take care, man
Al
On the 2nd drawing:
Don't be afraid to let your ellipses run into/behind the body panels. I hope I am making sense. It seems you allowed the back edge of the bumper to dictate your tire/rim ellipses, let those run into the body panels. Draw them past your bumper line and then erase the part of the ellipses that is hidden by the bumper.
Well, I may be totally off on my recommendation because these are toons and rules don't apply, I think.
Great job
Take care, man
Al
5uPrA RyDa
08-11-2004, 05:28 PM
thanks al for the advice ill do that next time, thanks!
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