My first Sketches

Hello these are my first cars....the bmw is colored in paintshop...
what do you think about the sketches?

http://anouk.altervista.org/bmw_ok2.jpg


http://anouk.altervista.org/rz2.jpg

Hmm... You've got some interesting concepts going on. I suggest that you work on drawing from real pictures first. I can understand that wavy cars like those are hard to draw realistically, but try to get your drawings to be more smooth and clean. Also, try to improve your proportions.

PLeeeeeaaaaaaase make your pics smaller......

Please resize your pictures.

you just threw everyone with 56k out the window...

not me though...cable...

hell yes.

make em smaller, it's hard to see and criticise it.

The top one looks cool, but I had to resize my desktop just to see it. The bottom one looks a bit sketchy though. Proportions are pretty good.

I've resized...I hope that now goes well...


However...I know that I must work on proportion, but I'm a newbie and I've so many things to learn...

Nickee!! I LOVE the orange BMW. I think that's some awesome design you've got going...do you mind if I take a little stab at it?

Take what you want (also if I don't know what mean STAB..)...is awesome for me :)

Now that I can see all of it ;), I think the top one looks more like an Audi than a BMW, just MO.

uve got the main stuffs done...........but, u need work on the lil details that make the car look good.......and a lil work on the proportions

work on proportions and try and make ur sketch lines cleaner.

he didnt design that orange bmw he has traced over someone else's drawing which i have seen a couple of months ago... although he has changed a couple of minor things, does that really count?

could you send us a link?

My first "good" drawing was one on a Modded Celica see it at http://www.geocities.com/ndfspd123/CelicaSketch.html Say what you think about it.