Please crit...

Here it is...

http://img16.exs.cx/img16/6808/carpic.jpg

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Not bad, but have the hood line a little higher, afterall, it needs to fit an engine...

What do you mean? The hood as in the bonnet? You really think it's too low cuz i can't see it, it may just be me though. Anywho, Thanks for your comment...

More comments are welcome :D .

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you are british or kiwi or aussie? yes, the bonnet. =hood. boot=trunk.
rear pods= diffusers. i forget what headers are called in the UK and aussie/kiwi. the name is on the tip of my tongue. hate that. oh, yes. headers, i think, are called "extractors."

anyway. your elipses are rather good eventhough they are shakey -they are aligned in the proper planes of foreshortening for the setup that you have established. but where are the spokes? and the car's body seems too narrow.

you are too developmental with this one to say much more. you're not at a point yet to reveal much. commit to more of it and i can really hit you hard with crits.

you draw and design well, mate. :)

Yeah Bonz, I'm from the UK :biggrin: . This is the development of the grill. You like? any ways of improvements say...

http://img19.exs.cx/img19/1280/sportscar.jpg

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Ok, I give up, Bonz always says everything.....just joking.

I know you are not finished but practice more on those ellipses.
Your lines on the car and the perspective look good to me.

Take care

al

looks pretty good so far

Thanx for the comments aseans and jeep. Here is a quick render...

http://img7.exs.cx/img7/3130/8977.jpg

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looks like an aston martin.

i like that, mate. but, dooooood, you gotta do the wheels. the elipses are awesome, btw.

Thanks Bonz, yeah i'll get the wheels done, sometime :D . This is a hatchback version... Hope you like...

http://pichold.com/tmp/hatchback.jpg

Thanx.

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gams, i like your work. you are into subtlety. maybe you can help me with photochop.

cheers.

Hey Bonz, here is a tutorial you could try. I learned off this, so give it a try...

http://carspyshots.proboards2.com/index.cgi?board=sketch&action=display&num=1089309372

Hope it helps. Tell me how you get on ;) .

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gams, that photochop 'toot looks great. i bookmarked her. thanks much.

No probs ;) . Anywho, this is a 'cleaned-up' version of the first sketch... What do you think?

http://img47.exs.cx/img47/8185/SPORTS_CAR.jpg

Thanks.

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in the 3/4 profile you have here, the passgnr side front indicates that the side of the fasica widens out to a flare just under, and to the side of, the headlamp.

when you render this, you need to indicate a drop-shadowy area under the driver side headlamp to indicate this further. do you follow what i am saying?

Yeah, kind of. But it seem so complicated! I hate dropshadows :banghead: . I give it a try anyways and see how it goes :biggrin:

Thanks for pointing that out Bonz :smile:

Which rendering style do you like better... i'll do that shadow thing it in my 'final' render btw, this is just a preview... Anyways, comments... :D

http://img40.exs.cx/img40/4074/sportcar.jpg

Thanks.

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I like that alot better. Looks more realistic than the sharp hard to light reflections of the other one IMO. Change the rims though, the spherical blur doesn't look right.