New drawing

too big ill make it smaller
http://img21.imageshack.us/img21/204/1803.jpg
heres a drawing i just did a couple of days ago, tell me what u think

c&c would be great

oh yea sorry about that bend in the paper :iceslolan

you're getting better... it looks the only big things i see are the body shape... the way you put the spoiler in --- flat, doesnt match the angle of the rest of the car put it more on a slant... put the wing on the angle of the hood line and the wheels dont match...the front is 6 spoke and the rear is 5 but those can be fixed easily.... the shading and all that is good and the ground fx kit looks really good

Better neater cleaner meaner.

You've been doin your homework. Keep it up.

Try to shore up your lines and perspective before you jump in with all your shading.

-Lemorris

thanks for the advice josiah and lemorris.

nice job. but i agree w/ the others. the shading is really improving, but i would work on proportions first. All I can suggest is to take your time with the outline drawing. Trust me... if you can combine a perfectly proportioned outline with your shading techniques, you'll end up with an awesome drawing.

Keep practicing

Alex

try the grid method, and for shading, go dark to light...your whole car is pretty much one shade

Getting better! Take more time on the details, (like the seats) and you'll improve loads.

good job. i think that you should start working on your detial more along with everthing everyone else said