First 3D toon! (based on unkfnrl's mustang)

well, ive been workin on 3d toons for a lil bit now and finally got one im satisfied with. here it is...give me all the criticism you want. but i wanna give credit to unfknrl for the original cause it was his. i hope he doesnt mind. also, my g.f is helpin me out with drawing. (shes been drawing for 7 years now.) i know the back wheels screwed up...im jus not good with wheels.

http://files.automotiveforums.com/gallery/watermark.php?file=/500/354273dmustangtoon.jpg

I like it. Next time, try using sharpie.

Looks good. Is the car radioactive? The wheels look like it.

About the sharpie. Be careful with sharpies, they sometimes bleed or if you are incosistent with speed of movement there will be variations in line thickness.

i say use a fine tip sharpie but follow what mike said it bleeds a lot. nice job though on the cartoon though!

yea...i went over it with a thin black marker and now it looks bad. well, jus the wheels mostly. the outline looks good. im thinkin bout tryin to color it...now im workin on an MR2...:)

Looks sweet, i like it! U must color it it will look good!

Perhaps you should concentrate on the shapes around the wheel...things like the wheel well.

The shapes around an object create the shape of the object.

Does that make sense?

it would look hot in red or blue... thats my opinion tho

looks good man. glad i could be of some influence for someone else to draw. for me, the wheels are the hardest part to draw. well, anything round-ish for that matter. i'm working on drawing the ford lightning concept and the wheels and headlights are just killing me. back to your drawing though, few things i noticed:

1. the driver's side headlight isnt the same size as the passenger side.
2. the driver's side hoodscoop line isn't parallel with the rest of the hood.