my first attempt at cartoon drawing

http://members.tccoa.com/unfknrl/sketches2.jpg

Here are my first 2 attempts at this type of drawing. The truck was my first and really didnt finish it.

c&c would be appreciated. A friend asked me to draw some of these on a wall at his house so I need some practice. I know I need to work on my wheels still. I dont know if this is the right place to ask but where can I find drawings like this on the internet? The only reference drawing I had to do these is the on in the logo on this site. Thanks.

He wants you to draw on a wall? Better practice then:)

They look good, you should try and finish the second one though, is it a new F150?

Well paint or airbrush on a wall, if he still has his airbrush.

The 2nd one is actually a f250, or at least what I planned on it to be.

You need to practice!! Search the threads for Kartoonz' cartoons (?) go here for one that would look cool airbrushed : http://www.automotiveforums.com/vbulletin/showthread.php?t=182323&highlight=kartoonz

Also, try not to make your drawings look square.

http://www.cartooncars.com/frameset.htm
http://www.gtstreetracing.com/cartoon_cars.html
try these maybe, and i agree with Ross don't make them look square, for the first time they look very well!

The Mustang is the better of the two. However, cars have curves. Your drawings show them having sharp edges. Try to loosen up and draw with your arm for quick sketches.

thanks for the links and c&c.
http://members.tccoa.com/unfknrl/drawings/sketch2.jpg

hows this? Is it still too square-ish?

I noticed that the truck was very boxy but the 05 mustang was square-ish because the car is kinda that way to me.

that looks better to me...cant wait to see it finished

They all look pretty good for your first attempts. Good job!

wow! that one is gr8! can't wait to see it finished! it looks very good and i don't think that it looks square-ish!

You've got a good confident line I like that.

http://www.georgetrosley.com

fantastic!!

Remember.....stay loose. Don't worry so much about proportions and spacing and stuff like that. Think about attitude, stance, and exaggeration.

Have fun.

-Lemorris

@lemorris

man thats an awesome link u gave!

George Trosley wrote me and helped me through art school. We still correspond on a regular basis. he was a major contributor to CARtoons magazine, and one of the reasons I draw cars at all.

He's a very cool dude.

he should be! he has very cool drawing on the site!

Looks cool bud good work .Now make big oversized wheels and your all set

http://members.tccoa.com/unfknrl/drawings/mustangsketch2.jpg

pretty much done drawing everything, now just need to add detail

I like it!!

The hood is great.

You might want to thicken up the outer lines...give it some weight.

Nice.

-Lemorris

Much better than your first try! I like the hood aswell. Are you going to aribrush it?

Wow, looks great! Very crisp!

Wow, look's great. Good job!

Nice job, the stang is looking real nice