3 More...

...Here they are:

http://files.automotiveforums.com/gallery/watermark.php?file=/503/186128concept3-med.jpg

http://files.automotiveforums.com/gallery/watermark.php?file=/503/186128concept21-med.jpg

http://files.automotiveforums.com/gallery/watermark.php?file=/503/186128conept1-med.jpg


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wow your big into concepts aren't you? those are really cool.... they're really simple as of right now and i dont know if you're planning on adding color or whatnot but i like the concepts

wow your big into concepts aren't you? those are really cool.... they're really simple as of right now and i dont know if you're planning on adding color or whatnot but i like the concepts

Yea i guess, i would add color if i had the materials too, but i dont. What would be good for coloring?? Maybe prisma pastels or something? Colored pencils? i would think pastells would look cool... but i dont know..

prismacolor pencils or markers

they look cool

funny tho, all of your concepts kinda take the shape of beatles or beetles, or whatever

Really? i did a beatle but it looked kind of wierd. maybe ill post it now, for kicks.

SeCrEtMoDdEr your almost always online arent you?

I like the middle one the best, it looks sweet.


PS: Do something about you sig you, its not terribly appropriate, k?

only like, yesterday, the day before, today and maybe the next couple days

cuz i got exams, and i study by my computer, im bored as crap so all i've been doing is posting, then studying

haha, i cant go anywhere or do anything cuz i gotta study, so thats explains it

I like the middle one the best, it looks sweet.


PS: Do something about you sig you, its not terribly appropriate, k?


Ok KustmAce

heres the bug

brace yourself, its ugly: :uhoh:

http://files.automotiveforums.com/gallery/watermark.php?file=/503/186128bug.jpg

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i like how the are kind of similar to the beetle, good job

Dude! You're still cartoony! Don't be so bubbly and round, especially around the 3 pillars. The best of the entire bunch is the second one, with the sharper edges. Add more contrast and don't start colouring yet. You can experiment, but for now concentrate on getting a more realistic feel. Look at real dimensions in wheelbase, overhangs etc, and reproduce these general dimensions on paper. Also don't forget about ground clearence and wheel proportions. You're perspective seems fairly good, some minor stuff with the window lines maybe, and the proprotions are there... This stuff is looking good and you've got a nice sketchy feel, now just add constrast, loosen up, and make more lines rather than a lot of tight curves.

When you do get to colouring, then do a nice chnk of colours (with Prisma or Tria markers) and then add gradients by using chalk pastels. Take a bit of the pastel, grind it into a powder, then smudge it in the appropriate places with a bit of toilet paper. Keep in mind this should take place later on, for now concentrate on the basics. Keep loose!

Good ideas flowing there...But i strongly suggest you work on your lines. Just try drawing a basic straight line (without lifting the pencil) , then curve it, then draw a circle, then use them to turn em into shapes and all. And like try to concentrate less on the shading ...more on the form.
anyways thats my advice- hope its of use

Yeh, those are some good points. Instead of making a lot of "hairy" lines, draw from your shoulder, make longer cleaner lines. They will be lighter and looser, nicer in general. A good excerscise for this is actually draw standing up. This way you avoid drawing from your wrist. Just keep it loose!

thanks for your pointers.