a quick sketch

woah...haven't posted for an eternity!

nyways
check it out- get me feedback!
http://tinypic.com/78zl

http://tinypic.com/78zl

I love your style! But I wish the image wasnt so big.

I love your style! But I wish the image wasnt so big.

hehe i just realized how big it looked...resized and cropped it
thx for the reply

looks cool...HUGE rims and a very chopped top...trace it and clean it up some more. that would make it look even better.

looks cool...HUGE rims and a very chopped top...trace it and clean it up some more. that would make it look even better.

yes

different.

That looks cool! Tidy it up like the others said and it will look much better!

I like your design; looks cool.

al

cool
Are you using blue marker and pencil>

That looks cool! Tidy it up like the others said and it will look much better!

I really like how messy it is, it makes it look more like a concept sketch. You should see some of my sketches, they are messy as hell.

I like the sketchy feel too.

Cool concept!

I know it sometimes looks better sketchy, but there are a few unnecesary 'squiggles' here and there...

heh yea...I aggree about the unnecessary squiggles and all and yea I am using a pen for the lines and pencil for the shading. This is just a rough sketch... thats why it looks messy- but I will post a better version soon.

heh yea...I aggree about the unnecessary squiggles and all and yea I am using a pen for the lines and pencil for the shading. This is just a rough sketch... thats why it looks messy- but I will post a better version soon.

Wow now that is rough! Looks very cool though!

Can't seem to get a cleaner one done.
But here's another one->
http://tinypic.com/7h8m
http://tinypic.com/7h8m

Well, that is a bit cleaner if that is what you are after.

me likes.

20 min?

I liky

damn those r good

i'm off to do some like it.....

comeon people...i want some harsh criticism...you pro's out there!

comeon people...i want some harsh criticism...you pro's out there!

be careful for what you ask for...

uhhh?

uhhh?

tonite i am very busy. but when i have a moment, you're going to get it.

you aren't going to like it.

haha I'll be anxiously waiting :)

Nice drawings man! Not too much I can say... Do you visit Car Design News?

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www.cardesignnews.com
Excelent car design site, the boards are really helpful too!

You're feel is very professional, and I can't say too much. Just a couple things. It looks as if the car on the paper is rather small. Try getting some bigger newsprint paper (or any other sketch paper). Then your drawing can be a lot bigger in all directions, AND you can add more detail. I'd expand on your reflections as well, if I were you, that's what I'd explore with, reflections.

Yea I'm a member of cardesignnews (known there as whitepawn).
You're right, the sketches were rather small and I believe that my reflections and shading style is still poor. But I'm working on it.
Thx for the advices, really appreciate them.

comeon people...i want some harsh criticism...you pro's out there!

as i posted earlier, i like your sketches. they are very loose and free, yet convey some degree of accuracy to design nuances.

it is clever of you to use the bleed-through marker base-sheet thing to draw the sketch on. you made the bleed marks into a sort of interesting 'design panel' or flat.

as bold as the concepts are and competently sketched, i am wondering why you do not convey an equally economincal use of contrast to create sheet metal and glass f/x? this can be done extremely quickly and efficiently. being a member of the cardesigners site, i would think you would have gotten a clue about how to do that by now (unless you are witholding drawings none of us have ever seen).

i mention that only because instead of leaving the sketches as purely line drawings, you have attempted texture. so why bother doing that if you will not follow through with it?

Umm, to tell u the truth I havent really learned how to create the glass and sheet metal fx. You do make a good point, I should learn how. Got any tutorials?

Umm, to tell u the truth I havent really learned how to create the glass and sheet metal fx. You do make a good point, I should learn how. Got any tutorials?

do you own a car? if so, then you already know what i will say.

i dont understand...im a little slow...:smokin:

soooooo elaborate cuz i dont like being confuseded. wait...confused

sheet metal?!?!?

but i guess it doesnt matter cuz this doesn't involve me at all.

:sunglasse

I tink he mean dat he dun't know how to do FX...bonz saying draw hsi own car if he own one...

I dont own a car...lol im a lil confused too o_0

I dont own a car...lol im a lil confused too o_0

in the beginning, it is important to draw, mimic, what you see from nature. then you can invent your creative scenarios convincingly. if you do not observe the natural world, then how can you create a fantasy world that is acceptable to the eye?

take yourself out with paper and pencil and observe the world all around you. take a hard cold look at the mirror-like quality of glass, water, metal. what does light do on this surface? how is it you can see through water or glass whilst it reflects things back at your eye, too? and how do you show this?

you need to examine this very seriously. and make mistakes and fail. and then you will learn. the only tutorial is suffering through failure. force the pencil to bend to your will. make it suffer with you.

there are millions of cars per square acre near you right now. there is no excuse for you to not have resources. taking a walk is for free. pack some water and snacks to offset the painful time ahead of you.

take dunkaroos

i've always like dunkaroos

now i understand much much better

i might do that, im starting to sketch stuff outside...

welp, im off to FAIL

:smokin:

take dunkaroos

i've always like dunkaroos

now i understand much much better

i might do that, im starting to sketch stuff outside...

welp, im off to FAIL

:smokin:

that's the spirit, matey.

in the beginning, it is important to draw, mimic, what you see from nature. then you can invent your creative scenarios convincingly. if you do not observe the natural world, then how can you create a fantasy world that is acceptable to the eye?

take yourself out with paper and pencil and observe the world all around you. take a hard cold look at the mirror-like quality of glass, water, metal. what does light do on this surface? how is it you can see through water or glass whilst it reflects things back at your eye, too? and how do you show this?

you need to examine this very seriously. and make mistakes and fail. and then you will learn. the only tutorial is suffering through failure. force the pencil to bend to your will. make it suffer with you.

there are millions of cars per square acre near you right now. there is no excuse for you to not have resources. taking a walk is for free. pack some water and snacks to offset the painful time ahead of you.

Woah! sounds like an epic adventure^), Im on it!

that's the spirit, matey. Yeah! Only 14 more days o' skool left till I fail! Woo hoo!

Woah! sounds like an epic adventure^), Im on it!

yes it is quite that. get on it.

remember this warm-fuzzy thing, too: failure is success in disguise.

Is it really? Wow, that is a new one. Then some people in my school are more succesful then me:P;)

Those are cool concepts. I just think you're tires are big...But that is cool if it is just a sketch...

woah, failure is a warm fuzzy thing in disguise

no way

believe what you want.