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Pen sketched concept car, colored


you
06-09-2004, 03:39 PM
Here it is, my first ever colored car and my first time using markers. it turned out ok.

I sketched it using a ball point pen..

its.....

...ok

http://files.automotiveforums.com/gallery/watermark.php?file=/503/186128carcolored.JPG

you
06-09-2004, 04:12 PM
Sloppy as hell....

now that i look at it.

5uPrA RyDa
06-09-2004, 05:28 PM
looks good...but the back needs some work. Good job though

LilGmoney
06-09-2004, 07:01 PM
uhmm...Ok, is that it?

What type of car is it?

Ra_15
06-10-2004, 02:02 AM
Looks ok, you need to sort out the roof and back wheel. When you use markers you need to use long smooth hand strokes. Also, the front air intake by the front wheel is alot bigger than the rear wheel, which makes the rear one look a bit wierd. Good for a first try though! I'm sure AnsisK will write a book full of information to help you improve! :D j/k.

you
06-10-2004, 11:19 AM
I'm sure AnsisK will write a book full of information to help you improve! :D j/k.

Yeah lol :iceslolan

I did it in pen so there was kinda no turing back so i just went with it. I think i did to fast too. Next time im gonna spend more time coloring certian parts of the car...


...plus i had about four prisma markers only that were kind of dry so i need to by some more.

you
06-10-2004, 02:08 PM
Here is a quick sketch of the car from another angle. Maybe it will give you a better idea of it. less cartoonish looking
http://files.automotiveforums.com/gallery/watermark.php?file=/503/186128conceptangle2.JPG


p.s. i know it only has one wheel..

AnsisK
06-11-2004, 07:02 PM
It still is a bit cartoony.

Your lines are too bouncy and bubbly. Don't be afraid of using a ruler. I'd also make the far-side windscreen line less steep.

you
06-11-2004, 11:36 PM
Thanks for your comments, they helped.

bonzelite
06-13-2004, 03:38 AM
the car borders on kartoon. but i like it for some reason. it works. you draw very well. you could get better. well, you will get better. but you are fine. the perspective thing is good, too, so far --do more.

SeCrEtMoDdEr
06-13-2004, 09:21 AM
the car borders on kartoon. but i like it for some reason. it works. you draw very well. you could get better. well, you will get better. but you are fine. the perspective thing is good, too, so far --do more.

c'mon bonzelite, this isn't the time, nor the place

:lol:

bonzelite
06-13-2004, 01:21 PM
c'mon bonzelite, this isn't the time, nor the place

:lol:

wtf? if you're implying what i think you are, dood, you got it all wrong!!! :lol:

HighOctaneNOSUser
06-13-2004, 01:45 PM
Lol, I think he is...Lmao, gotta watch out Bonz, he is like that...

BuLLDoGG
06-13-2004, 01:52 PM
very nice! no the car has a spoiler, looks better with it!

you
06-13-2004, 03:05 PM
Sorry bonzelite, i dont swing that way...

SeCrEtMoDdEr
06-13-2004, 03:06 PM
hehehe, see what i have done

:smokin:

bonzelite
06-13-2004, 06:31 PM
Sorry bonzelite, i dont swing that way...

i tell you what, you, i can have a couple of apes hogtie you to a tree and have a donkey give you a good workover.

bonzelite
06-13-2004, 06:43 PM
hehehe, see what i have done

:smokin:

look what you have done:
http://files.automotiveforums.com/gallery/watermark.php?file=/500/55975mirrors_again_1-med.jpg

SeCrEtMoDdEr
06-13-2004, 08:00 PM
i tell you what, you, i can have a couple of apes hogtie you to a tree and have a donkey give you a good workover.

HELLO!!!

NICE drawing

HighOctaneNOSUser
06-13-2004, 08:10 PM
Lol, this is getting out of hand again. I'd call a mod if I was a rat but Dommy built it, so they will come anyway.

SeCrEtMoDdEr
06-13-2004, 08:34 PM
hey, wheres the back view you. did you plan on doing one, im interested to see what it'll look like

oh, and interiors are becoming popular... how bout it?

you
06-13-2004, 11:32 PM
i tell you what, you, i can have a couple of apes hogtie you to a tree and have a donkey give you a good workover.

Are you like Beastmaster or something? Do you have control over animals????

:eek:

bonzelite
06-14-2004, 01:25 AM
Are you like Beastmaster or something? Do you have control over animals????
:eek:
i was on the mountain, and i saw the land below.
i was below and in the land, and i saw the mountain when i looked up.
when i looked up, i saw the opposite direction of where i stood.
from where i stood, i could remain either on land
or climb back up the mountain. :)

SeCrEtMoDdEr
06-14-2004, 08:59 AM
oo oo i know

your climbing a mountain, and you slip so your hanging upside down. Your in the middle of the mountain...you can see the land when you look down...and yoiu can see the mountain when you look up...when you look up, its the opposite direction of where you stand because your upside down...and you can either repel all the way down to be on the ground, or flip your self to the right direction and continue to climb the mountain.

BOOYAKA!

you
06-14-2004, 12:57 PM
oo oo i know

your climbing a mountain, and you slip so your hanging upside down. Your in the middle of the mountain...you can see the land when you look down...and yoiu can see the mountain when you look up...when you look up, its the opposite direction of where you stand because your upside down...and you can either repel all the way down to be on the ground, or flip your self to the right direction and continue to climb the mountain.

BOOYAKA!

I was thinking the same thing...

bonzelite
06-14-2004, 01:38 PM
oo oo i know

your climbing a mountain, and you slip so your hanging upside down. Your in the middle of the mountain...you can see the land when you look down...and yoiu can see the mountain when you look up...when you look up, its the opposite direction of where you stand because your upside down...and you can either repel all the way down to be on the ground, or flip your self to the right direction and continue to climb the mountain.

BOOYAKA!

:bigthumb: excellent! now back to our topic....

you
06-14-2004, 01:41 PM
I have a fealing this thread is going to be closed..

SeCrEtMoDdEr
06-14-2004, 01:46 PM
not if you dont MAKE A SIDE VIEW

:smokin:

bonzelite
06-14-2004, 01:46 PM
I have a fealing this thread is going to be closed..

but we're back on topic now. someone just remind me of what the topic really is. and i'm johnny-on-it.

:icon16:

you
06-14-2004, 01:49 PM
I dont think there is a topic anymore..

I dont think im doing anything else with those drawings..

bonzelite
06-14-2004, 01:49 PM
not if you dont MAKE A SIDE VIEW

:smokin:

LOL!

SeCrEtMoDdEr
06-14-2004, 01:53 PM
but we're back on topic now. someone just remind me of what the topic really is. and i'm johnny-on-it.

:icon16:

HAHAHAHA


OK back on topic, when you say you're done with this drawing, you're wrong, because you arent done. you wanna know why you aren't done, because theres NO SIDE VIEW!!!

:smokin:

bonzelite
06-14-2004, 01:54 PM
the second sketch you posted, the one that is unfinished and without the rear wheel, is really good. that is getting to a point where you can seriously finish it.

add some side-mirrors (make sure they are in the same baselines) and work a bit more on sexying up the front fascia/intercooler opening. add some foglights on either side of it.

and then color it. pay attention this time to reflections and textures. strive to get away from "flat" coloring. look at some of your favorite import 'zines for this. or go out, better yet, and look at your own car. or your parent's cars, whomever it is that owns a car. :)

you
06-14-2004, 01:58 PM
I dont own a car. im home alone so theres no cars at the house. However there is a red sentra accross the street, but im afraid if i go walk around it and look at the the owner may shoot me.

Oh and i have no materials to color with...

All i have is a graphite pencil that i shade with..

SeCrEtMoDdEr
06-14-2004, 02:00 PM
why would they shoot you you?

do you live in alabama...or texas...or michigan...or new york...wow, theres a lot of states i'd be scared to live in

bonzelite
06-14-2004, 02:04 PM
I dont own a car. im home alone so theres no cars at the house. However there is a red sentra accross the street, but im afraid if i go walk around it and look at the the owner may shoot me.

Oh and i have no materials to color with...

All i have is a graphite pencil that i shade with..

you don't got no colors to play with?

i got me some colors. you go to art store. now you git on down dare.

go on and git!

tell duh guy wit the sentra you is a secret agent.

and git a car mag, man. i be serious.

you
06-14-2004, 02:05 PM
No, i live in atlanta, the hip hop capital! Holla!

you
06-14-2004, 02:07 PM
I just said i have no car. You want me to walk to 20 miles to dick blick! go to my other thread...

bonzelite
06-14-2004, 02:10 PM
No, i live in atlanta, the hip hop capital! Holla!

hotlanta? sh!t. i lived dare 'bout 5 yr a'go. den i moov tah LA. hotlanta was hella hot and ain't nuttin gon down. so i pack up and split yo. LA is hella tyte yo. tit$ a$$ and pimpin ryde.

how is my faux ghetto?

you
06-14-2004, 02:12 PM
Idd rather live in Atlanta then LA although its hella humid here right now and about 90 out. I think bobby brown owns the sentra so im not going to mess with it...

bonzelite
06-14-2004, 02:17 PM
nope. had to jet outta atlanta asap. been dare too long. is boring.

you
06-14-2004, 02:26 PM
I made a new thread today, yet everybody keeps posting here...

This is like a weak and half old thread..

SeCrEtMoDdEr
06-14-2004, 03:37 PM
damn bonz

tat was fo' sheezy my neezy

bonzelite
06-14-2004, 03:46 PM
I made a new thread today, yet everybody keeps posting here...

This is like a weak and half old thread..

you have ADD?

you
06-14-2004, 04:02 PM
no...

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