my....concept cars sketches?

hey i just started drawing cars.. this is about.. my...10th attempt? .... both were drawn off the top of my head maybe someone can tell me what i shld turn the car into.. sorry about the lightness of the drawing..
i jst been staring at a lot of supercars recently so.. i decided to sketch some...

any advice would be gladly accepted

http://files.automotiveforums.com/gallery/watermark.php?file=/503/192572Car_14-med.jpg


oh yea and these too... um..... its kinda supposed to be a gallardo... but only roughly...

http://files.automotiveforums.com/gallery/watermark.php?file=/503/192572Car_15-med.jpg

http://files.automotiveforums.com/gallery/watermark.php?file=/503/192572Car_161-med.jpg

btw these are all WIPs... soo... im kinda updating the fotos as i go.. so theyll gradually change.

The proportions are quite good. The first on looks like you stuck the rear of a Honda NSX onto the front of a Gallardo. The second one looks like a 360 Modena with Honda NSX lights! Try to be more original if their concepts, or if they're real supercars, do yourself a favor and use a ref pic. From what you've done, if you use a ref pic, the proportions would be excelent, and the shading... well have to see :).

Looking good man! Just throw in a bit more detail and some other basics and you're there!!! Look of Ross's threads (Ra_15) and see some of my (and others) crits. It will help you out.

Looks pretty good so far, like the others mentioned, more detail.

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i'm a broken record: learn to do elipses, learn to do elipses, learn to do elipses.....

alright.. cheers ppl.more detail.. yeap.. atm im trying to do alot of quick sketches and get the proportions right.... is that the right thing to do? elipses? yeap. my wheels are...strange i realised. i can never seem to get the wheels to work. usually the back wheel.

alright.. cheers ppl.more detail.. yeap.. atm im trying to do alot of quick sketches and get the proportions right.... is that the right thing to do? elipses? yeap. my wheels are...strange i realised. i can never seem to get the wheels to work. usually the back wheel.

take a lesson from al and do freehand sketching, quickly. you'll loosen up. it may take you years to loosen up.

To learn proportions use the grid method. I did that for about 6 months and now I am sketching with out the grid from pictures as well as doing concepts without reference.