Cartoon Civic

Here's a cartoon civic i drew a while back (like two weeks or something) . Comments would be great

http://pic11.picturetrail.com:80/VOL380/2148465/4181162/54413010.jpg

Oh yea sorry for the quality of the picture

where's the huge flame from the exhaust?? it needs NOS to be a real toon... jk looks good man

um it doesnt look finished, add lines to the thingy in the front bodykit, i forget what it called, and maybe add some different shades of grey lines to ur exhaust, it'll look like chrome! nice toon!

:off topic:
I how do you guys post your pics without the link?
Like the one above?
And how do you make your own signature?

You copy the image string that appears below the image that you upload. Then to add Signature, Avatar etc, you go to the User CP link at the top of any page.

:off topic:
I how do you guys post your pics without the link?
Like the one above?
And how do you make your own signature?
i could make ya a signature

um it doesnt look finished, add lines to the thingy in the front bodykit, i forget what it called, and maybe add some different shades of grey lines to ur exhaust, it'll look like chrome! nice toon!

the thingy in the front bodykit... you mean the intercooler, maybe?

and the drawing... looks pretty good, but you don't see blue rims too often... and that wing and exhause pipe are HUGE. but it's a toon so it doesn't matter because everything should be exaggerated so you did a good job. :biggrin:

great effort of design. get a bit more mileage on you for working with materials more seriously. it looks smudged and "worked into a million directions of texture" to death. learn control.

nice concept.

Castback:
you said you could make my signature?
That'll be great! Thanks man.