del sol i drew

heres a del sol i drew it came out good ,comments would be great peace

http://pic11.picturetrail.com:80/VOL380/2148465/4181162/54412994.jpg

well the first thing i think is, " wow this thing has some lean on it". i thought that because mainly you front window is leaning way too far back.

another thing i noticed is on your front bumper....it needs to come down a little on the left side and maybe needs to be less flat on the bottom edge.

looks good besides those points :biggrin: i like the angle of this one

your perspective is just a little off, and the rear weel is way too far into the fender(unless it's meant to be a toon). did u use a ref pic? the car seems to get skinnier from front to back.

yea i know about the lean i noticed that too im going to fx that and the bumper, and super yea i did use one but it was little thats why i had to make it different from the picture yea i know about the back wheel also


thanxs for the comments

Darn you too. You all said what i was thinking.

Looks like it was in a 100,000 MPH wind tunnel.

This could be really cool if you stylized and exaggerated a little bit more.

Some super think contour lines would look cool.

I like the front tire a lot.

Make your darks darker.

Nice and loose, I'm feelin it.

-Lemorris

is it just me or is lacking any kind of A-pillar?

Looks like it was in a 100,000 MPH wind tunnel.

:rofl:

omg, yes.

he has a good effort. i will address this in another post.

is it just me or is lacking any kind of A-pillar?

:lol2:

yes. another one!

there is no thickness whatsoever to the a-pillar. it is just a line.
and the rear wing is a "phantom wing." where does it go?

this car is wanting to be more of a kartoon kar. but the perspective is not "properly violated."

heres a del sol i drew it came out good ,comments would be great peace


first off: learn to use proper english punctuation: finish complete thoughts with periods. <<< like this. and use commas, <<< like this, to create pauses in thoughts.

next, go here: http://www.automotiveforums.com/vbulletin/showthread.php?t=231385&page=1&pp=15

this is the "cheap advice thread" if the link doesn't work.

L00ks cool! :D I like the lean and shading looks great!

Spend more time on proportions and the black lines look a little sketchy.

But overall, :D

haha funny guys..... Thanks for the comments!