My first car drawing --- DC5 Integra

This is my first ever car drawing. I just started like 4 days ago, and I'm not done yet. Any feedback would be great. My reference pic didn't come out to great when I took a picture of it, sorry.

www.angelfire.com/ill/chrismcmurry/images/105_0543.JPG

www.angelfire.com/ill/chrismcmurry/images/105_0534.JPG

www.angelfire.com/ill/chrismcmurry/images/105_0541.JPG

Pictures dont work. Angelfire doesnt except remote linking just FYI.

Can you use the AF picture gallery?

http://www.angelfire.com/ill/chrismcmurry/images/105_0541.JPG

thats all im gettin

you cant see the pictures

in the member's gallery, there is an 80kb limit....the pics are 100kb.

DC5 Integra (http://community.webshots.com/s/image10/9/50/69/144295069MfCKvd_ph.jpg)

Reference Pic (http://community.webshots.com/s/image12/9/46/33/144294633GaphbQ_ph.jpg)

Neither link works.

i get :forbidden

Try using www.cardomain.com

f***k it all

Dont fuck it. I want to see it dammit.

Yeah i want to see it too. It can't be that bad, can it.

This is my first ever car drawing. I just started like 4 days ago, and I'm not done yet. Any feedback would be great. My reference pic didn't come out to great when I took a picture of it, sorry.

www.angelfire.com/ill/chrismcmurry/images/105_0543.JPG

www.angelfire.com/ill/chrismcmurry/images/105_0534.JPG

www.angelfire.com/ill/chrismcmurry/images/105_0541.JPG

scan your pics at a low low resolution and upload them to the gallery in this forum. then copy it, then paste it in this thread.

it took me forever to "get it," then one night i just did it. now i cannot see how i didn't understand.

Use JPEG files as the save about 70-80% of file size.
That way I can get 400dpi images to about 30kb!

Mail them to me, ill put them up...

I CAN SEE!

That's damn good for a first effort. Don't lose patience and bully your way through it towards the end. Keep up the process, and you'll have a pretty dope drawing.

Oh yeah, I suggest getting rid of the Honda logo on the back, and possibly lowering the roofline a lil' bit.

I CAN SEE!

That's damn good for a first effort. Don't lose patience and bully your way through it towards the end. Keep up the process, and you'll have a pretty dope drawing.

Oh yeah, I suggest getting rid of the Honda logo on the back, and possibly lowering the roofline a lil' bit.

Mind sharing the secret to seeing the light?

Uh-uh. It just shows up when I click on it.

the links at the very top should work now. at first, they didnt work for me either, but now for some reason they do. thanks for the feedback Diabolical, i'll consider removing the honda emblem. also, i dont have a scanner, i took pics with my digital camera.

they still dont work for me, why dont u just upload them to the AF gallery?

they still dont work for me, why dont u just upload them to the AF gallery?

Good idea, I still cant see them either.

if you guys would read, I told you that I cant because the limit is 80kb and the pics are 100kb+. And I cant save them any other way to make em smaller cuz I didn't scan em, I took pics with my digital camera and I have no photo editing program on my computer. im gonna email the pics to kustomace or i'll figure out a way to put em on.

What file type are they? Can't you just open them up in Microdoft Paint (you must have that...) and then save them as a JPEG file?

yah, thats how i make my pics smaller, paint, woohoo

CMON< i wanna see!!!!

ahh yes, resorting to the old paint trick again. I think I did once explain that to someone else once, but I can't quite remeber who. Damn, but I know they were never on again...I am just like a curse:P

ok i figured out how to do it.
http://files.automotiveforums.com/gallery/watermark.php?file=/500/184476RSX_Drawing-med.JPG
http://files.automotiveforums.com/gallery/watermark.php?file=/500/184476RSX_Reference-med.JPG

the back of the car seems to be tilted in a wrong way, looks pretty good though. and the front wheel need to tilt out more and show more rim, and the door line is wrongly drawn.

roportions are a little off but i like it

great for first car drawing. very impressive. i will not nit-pick it. put the drawing away and look at it in a year. you will see it differently then.

it is a good drawing besides the proportions.

the rightside of the roof (near the upper right side of the back window) needs to go down more.

also on the left tail light, bring the bottom left side of it up a little more. it is too wide.

i think that the rims and reflections on it look good so far. its just those little proportion things that will make or break a drawing.

way way way better than my first, i didn't know it was your first...

VERY good

very good for ur first,i think ur lights r too big. but its ur first so i wont go into detail YET

Definately off to a good start!