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in progress of lincoln zephyr


fwdfreak
05-11-2004, 04:26 PM
post your criticism and some feedback please

http://files.automotiveforums.com/gallery/watermark.php?file=/502/10424lincoln-med.jpg

:loser:

sorry for the shi**y quality I have no scanner, and this is all freehand, maybe my 5-6th try at drawin cars

Jeep_Rubicon
05-11-2004, 04:31 PM
lookin good so far

lostprophets
05-11-2004, 04:55 PM
is it supposed to be a toon.... if not the camber on the wheel needs to be fixed

fwdfreak
05-11-2004, 05:10 PM
its not a toon and I already fixed that, saw that on the picture..

Jeep_Rubicon
05-11-2004, 05:21 PM
one question is the car turning to the left because its on a slant.

fwdfreak
05-11-2004, 05:38 PM
yup it's on a slant on the reference pic, totally missed that.. 3 new things learned. shading a bit better, not to draw the car at the lowest part of the paper and remember those slants :P

5uPrA RyDa
05-11-2004, 08:12 PM
the back wheel is kind of slanted a little bit but it looks good

fwdfreak
05-13-2004, 11:10 AM
http://www.hot.ee/evoluzi0ne/lammas.jpg

soon to be finished

Jeep_Rubicon
05-13-2004, 04:03 PM
WHERE DID ALL THE LINES GO?!?!?!? i think you blured everything out, like on the left headlight u dont noe where it starts or where it ends. Your front wheel looks kinda flat.

mike@af
05-13-2004, 04:21 PM
The shading looks really really really rough.

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