first real toon

this is my first real attempt of a toon....ive done maybe 1 or two b4 but they looked awful.......also the first time ive ever drawin using color too......please leave comments and critisisms

pencil....sry bout the smudges
http://files.automotiveforums.com/gallery/watermark.php?file=/503/78105silvia_toon_small-med.JPG

colored.....came out ok
http://files.automotiveforums.com/gallery/watermark.php?file=/503/78105silvia_color_toon_small-med.JPG

Pretty nice...looks like you used markers, correct?

Nice for your first time out the gate. I don't dare show mine...I might get banned :)

Tires look good.

Remember to stay loose. Try listening to old school funk. It really works for me.

Keep it up.

-Lemorris

Your cartoons lemorris?

Ive seen yours...theyre incredible.

Anyhoo, Knappster, thats pretty sweet for a first one. I like the color one. Work on your accuracy, even though it is a toon. For example, your wheel spokes are not centered, or straight. But that just comes with practice. And is that another huge rotor and caliper i see on the rear wheels? Thats some mighty stopping power...:biggrin:

:thumbsup:

good for ur first toon, its too toony 4 me

ur wheels have no depth in them they look 2-d but in alll it looks good i liked the graphics and the overall look

i agree about the wheels. make them thicker. great job on the color!

thanks for all the comments guys.....yes thats in done in marker....sharpies to be exact lol. im still working on the wheel....there the hardest think to make look good......can anyone give me tips on drawing them or have a tot. for me to look at.....thanks

I like it....dang its been a long time since Ive been on this site!

-andrew

see the skyline "SKYLINES RULE AND YOU KNOW IT !!" na u got it confused bro SUPRAS DO lol just messing with u

i listen to death metal when i draw :)

anyways, nice toon, and everyone pretty much covered wuts wrong, the wheels, really nice tho, i dont think i can do much better, but then again, im not into toons

Nice toon bro , I have a tut on our other site (see my sig look in tutorials) I think it will help you .
TOONZ RULE !