Pagani Zonda C12S

Hi, I'm Matt. I'm 13 years old. This is my first drawing that i've spent some time on. I know the rims are sorta messed up, but any constructive critizism would be appreciated.


Thanks






http://files.automotiveforums.com/gallery/watermark.php?file=/500/162203Scan10008-med.JPG

it's a toon right.. if you were tryin to go ror realism it needs to be longer.... and i would use a kleenex to smooth out your shading

i agree with lostprophets, about the toon.
u should make the bottom of the wheel's tire go all the way to the car body, its pretty good if its ur first drawing.

My scanner sorta distorted the picture so it looked like it is taller, sorry ( it actually wasn't supposed to be a toon)

Thanks for the advice

Hey Matt,

I like your zonda. I agree it needs to be a bit shorter and longer.

Your wheels are pretty good, but look a little 2-d, you may want to give them some depth. But the ellipses are good.

Also, I don't think the windows are mean't to be that dark on a zonda. You should be able to see some interior detail and highlights on the windshield.

Overall, apart from the toonish look, your perspective is good and I like your shading.

Keep it Up.

:)

-Mirza.

Hey Matt,

I like your zonda. I agree it needs to be a bit shorter and longer.


-Mirza.

u realise how little sense that makes right?

Oops! I mean't lower and longer.

:)

i should think so.

i really like ur zonda, matt, its pretty neat. i feel the same about the dimensions though.

that looks good. i agree with everyone else about just stretching it horizonaly. i hope that you can get some more on here. good job

It's not so much that it needs to be stretched, it's more like the front of the car and the back of the car are at different angles. Bring the left side (as if lookin at the front of the car) forward a bit more and maybe stretch a little bit. Show a little more roof, the windshield looks a little long, bring the top down a little bit and round the top off towards the back.

u realise how little sense that makes right?

that would be shorter as opposed to taller... :icon16: