my toon......azteck?

This is the azteck that i was going to put in the tuner contest. I rushed on it so it turned out like poop :disappoin . This is my first toon style car. There is alot of mistakes put please tell me where i need practice. It will help me in the future.




http://files.automotiveforums.com/gallery/watermark.php?file=/500/77285aztecm-med.JPG




p.s what is this smilie doing? :loser:

umm...ur pic looks nice...i'm not good so i can't contribute a lot to constructive crit....but the smiley is calling people a loser by making an "L" on his forehead

thx for the comment and thx for clearing up the smilie thing, but there has got to be something that doesn't look right to you.

its pretty cool as a cartoon...if you were going for realism, then u have a hefty list comin your way. If u want something to practice on, try working on your wheels a bit, they seem a little unrealistic, and way to far back on the chassis.

otherwise it looks pretty good, youd have to get Kartoonz' opinion tho

I agree with KustmAce
But you might want doors to get in the car.
mabie mirrors?
if you want

-Andrew

Yea i know i never realy finished it but i ment not to have mirrors

oh ok, but yea get kartoonz opinion

Hi ya castback , nice toon , what to work on ...here we go ..
first it's a toon right so exagerate the heck out of it , start with bigger wheel wells taller and larger .second make your wheels bigger much bigger. Chop the top slightly more , maybe add a big rear wing , they always add to the pic , add bigger air ducts ...remeber its a toon so you want things exagerated , dont exagerate everything but pick out things that you want noticed or to stand out . like wheels, spoilers, air ducts, or maybe an outside hood mounted tachometer . see what I'm gettin at ? Try this on another drawing using the same car you already drew . If you still need help I'll try to draw one for you. Hope this helps ya bro .

thanx for the ideas every1. i drew another toon today in special projects art. it is the barney five cop car up on three wheels. i will post when i get some color on it and can use my girlfriends scanner.

go for it. yeah, the car would look even better if the backend didnt stick out as much, but you still fixed up those weird aztecs.

dan