Improvents to my chopper

Hey everyone, This is a drawing of a chopper I previously put up on the forum, however the wheels were really small, ( really funny lookin acually), Ive since than have made some improvements to the drawing, please tell me what you think and if there is anything else I could do to the drawing, I will show a comparison between the old drawing and the new one. thanks' ..Paul

**Heres a picture of the old chopper drawing.

http://files.automotiveforums.com/gallery/watermark.php?file=/503/143070Pauls_Chopper1-med.JPG

**And now the improved version.

http://files.automotiveforums.com/gallery/watermark.php?file=/500/143070Improved_paul_chopper.JPG

wow thats a ton better...great job!

If Im not mistaken that was not drawn from a picture Correct?

Looks better now.

BTW do you like constructive criticism?

great job! i really like the frame

Yea, Im just beginning so any tips from more expierenced drawers is most appreciated

Heres just constructive criticism, sorry if it seems in a bad tone.

Try to draw from a picture for awhile so you learn the lines of the chopper. Your frame is extra long, and the oil tank looks as if it were rubbing the wheel. The best way for some people to learn the lines of something is to draw it over and over. For me, I dont notice a car or chopper all together, I notice all the lines and shapes, thats just me. Just try to draw from a picture until you get the flow of the lines.

Also, drawing from a pic can get you all the detail you want to put on the drawing.

Dont be afraid to use ellipse/circle templetes as well as some sort of straitedge.

yeah I can see what you are saying about the frame being too long, thanks for the feedback, the next drawing I do I will keep what you said in mind, thanks

Heres just constructive criticism, sorry if it seems in a bad tone.

Try to draw from a picture for awhile so you learn the lines of the chopper. Your frame is extra long, and the oil tank looks as if it were rubbing the wheel. The best way for some people to learn the lines of something is to draw it over and over. For me, I dont notice a car or chopper all together, I notice all the lines and shapes, thats just me. Just try to draw from a picture until you get the flow of the lines.

Also, drawing from a pic can get you all the detail you want to put on the drawing.

Dont be afraid to use ellipse/circle templetes as well as some sort of straitedge.


i concur