Toyota Truck

hey all, what do you think of this one?
http://www.automotivesports.net/forums/uploads//post-48-1072071057.jpg


and in case you didn't see my other one, the camaro:

http://www.automotivesports.net/forums/uploads//post-48-1072052338.jpg

Please feel free to critique either, or both! Thanks for the help.

again u have too much wrap on it, it makes u lose ur details on the bottom of the truck near axel, but it makes the front visor look good try to put less at some places and more at others

i dont quit understand what you did.. is it just an effect, or chop with effect?

Its the plastic-wrap effect on a drawn/traced image... I didn't know anyone else did that =P

I'm trying to work one a couple of designs for a tshirt by the way.. i wanted it to look..'airbrushed' sorta. I kinda liked the wrap on the underworkings hehe i thought it made it look mean. I'll work on the rest of the car though, i'm thinking of taking most of the wrap off of the grille area.

http://www.automotivesports.net/forums/uploads//post-48-1072103238.jpg

I fixed a few things, let me know if you think it's better or worse.

wow.. i had the brightness down on my comp.. lemme try again. :screwy:

http://www.automotivesports.net/forums/uploads//post-48-1072113302.jpg

colors better? (might need to turn monitor brightness up)

looks cool but i dont get the point of it very much

well i'm run/own a small automotive site www.automotivesports.net that supports forums for domestic, import, offroad and exotic.. was going to try and make a shirt design for each of the categories either all on one shirt or have a different shirt for each of those categories advertising the site. anyway, i wanted to try my hand at it, i don't really want to pay someone to do it if at all possible. Do you guys think these designs would look good on a shirt? or should i 'step away from the pencil'.

step away from the pencil, but its jus my opnion