my first concept posted- please comment

Hello all, Im in my last year of high school and I look forward to getting into industrial desigining in university or college. Im trying to get my portfolio done and improving my techniques. Heres a concept I drew and modified a lil using photoshop...As you will notice Im not very good at it. Anywyas please comment t'ill be really helpfull!
http://whitepawn.free-host.com/i.jpg
http://whitepawn.free-host.com/z.jpg

Well, Its not bad. Maybe make it a little bigger. The middle one reminds of the 2005 Concept NSX quite a bit. Did you use that for reference?

They are both dead links for me.

They are both dead links for me.

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nope...I didnt use that as a reference...and the links do work....just wait a lil :)

I think your drawing style is excellent for industrial desigining . since you need to make a lot of drawings in a very short time, you need quick drawings that 'explain' the product.. and that is exactly what your sketches do. You need to communicate the ideas, and not draw in detail.

I think they are very good :2cents:

thx a lot goosse- I think you are right abt the designers and quick drawing. I myself do draw my stuff pretty quickly using quick straight lines. But I often thought of my works as being too sketchy. But maybe that might just not be a bad thing after all...

Im totally new to this forum...but ill be posting more stuff pretty soon

Very nice work bud, I would like to see it completed .

hmmm....what exactly do u mean by completed? o_0