Poem...

Do you remember when
We weren’t friends
When you’d talk,
I’d look away.

But when you’d talk
To your friends
You couldn’t hear me
Listening.

Remember the day
Through AIM
You told me that
Earning my friendship
Was a challenge.

You told me
The biggest risk
Is not taking one
At all.

I got mad
Because you said that.
But inside,
Filled with joy.

Someone so nice
To befriend me.
To introduce me
To myself.

Then the day
I invited you
Over to my house
To hang out with my friends.


Do you remember
All those days?
Those fun times
Of innocence.

It was then
That you liked me.
And your friend
Liked that other guy.


I remember
getting close.
On the couch
During movies.

The world turns
I go out
With your friend.
You go out
With that other guy.

I had fun.
I enjoyed it.
You had a good time.
You dumped him,
But you two were still friends.

I thought I liked her.
I thought I needed her.
Then the dance came.
I fucked up.

No more her. No more me.
For the time being…
I felt dead.

Our whole friendship.
Our little clique.
All broken.
Turned to shit.

You told me
The biggest risk
Was not taking one
At all.

Now I’m left
All alone.
Left to die
On my own.


What can I do
To make this up?
Fix this problem...
What the fuck…

You told me
The greatest risk
Was not taking one
At all.

All of you
You still hang out.
I’m just left…
The odd man out…

All alone
I write this poem.
Stranded, branded
By my actions.

If I could wish
Upon a star…
I would wish
For you to be here.

Comfort me.
Hold me.
Tell me that
I matter.

I was then.
I am now.
Two different people
In your mind.

Just let me tell you
People change.
I have changed,
For worse or better,
I don’t know.

I’m more friendly
More welcoming,
Not harsh and mean
And ignorant.

But you liked
That old person
The one that
Looked like me.

Can you try
As a challenge
To be friends with….
What would I call it…

This new me?

it's a true story... :(

awww, now I feel all sad! Hope whoever it is reads your poem and it all sorts itself out for you. :(

Aww :( Thats a really nice poem...sucks its a true story though :(

Holy crap that's good....my poems always end up being horrible.

Hope you work it out bud!

i know that feeling after being dumped............all too well

Heavy stuff there dude.

Hope it turns out ok in the end.

hey there buddy, you sure know how to write down what you feel...I truly hope that everything works out for the best....keep me updated....okay....:)

we liked eachother, then were friends, then i went out with her friend, messed up when i was dancing with another girl, and her friend dumped me. she told me i'm a different person from the first time she saw me.

now we're pretty much all good.

Originally posted by blatch
now we're pretty much all good. Awesome!! :D :D :D

Damn blatch that was really deep , I just hope things work out for the better ;)