Back w/Shelby plus orc dood!

ok guys ive been having some trouble with this one. i know the headlights are mishapen and off proportion. But theres something else i think it might lie with the fenders or the stance or both tell me what you think harsh crits encouraged.
http://files.automotiveforums.com/uploads/483035shelbycobra2.jpg
Car drawing are more of a hobby, This is the type of stuff i normally do.
http://files.automotiveforums.com/uploads/283588orcdood2.jpg
anyway thanks for lookin!
Josh

Sweet!!!!!! Keep up ur drawin', that other picture is especially awesome!!!!! Talk to u latr!!!:icon16: :dogpile:

the image seems slightly squashed in the horizontal

also the front wheel look as though it has lots of camber.

and the bit just in front of the front wheel seems a bit high...

other than that...it is a very good drawing:bigthumb:

your normal stuff is of very high quality:eek2:

i think that the left head light and surrounding fender needs to move back because it looks a little far forward. but otherwise its great and your orc drawing is incedible!

thats really great

good work phaturbo!!:bigthumb: your normal drawing pictures are very nice. i dont think anything major is wrong with ur car... keep it up :biggrin:

Very nice
And your creature is da---bomb :eek: :eek:

al

Hi everyone sorry about the delayed response but I've been on holiday. dapj88 and simdel1 thank you for your input these crits will be used as im redoing the front right side again. the plan is to copy the original to a new sheet of paper to keep it clean and then attempt to shade it with red ball point pen. The orc is entirely ball point pen so you can get an idea of how smooth it can look. oh and i forgot to mention these are both entirely freehand i guess imma have to break down and buy some elipse templates those wheels are horrendous. Anyway i apologize again for the late reply and thanks to everyone for taking time to look and reply to my crappy pictures.

You did an excellent job. :bigthumb: Just a few suggestions:

1) Round the bottom lip off, it's too squarish.
2) The hood scoop is kinda big for a cobra.
3) The vents on the side are angled the wrong way for the angle the car is at.
4) The rectangle hole next to the closest bumper peice is a little too big, not enough space between it and the blinker.
5) The bumper peices are a little too big, they need to be the size of the inner lines of the closet bumper peice. (When this is done you can do #6)
6) Make the hood angle down a little more.
7) Also, you're missing the chrome piece behind the drivers head.

Other than that the front end is fine in size, cuz when you shade underneath the closest headlight it will be the correct size. Keep up the good work.