Hey. Here's my new design. I kinda like how things start going along when you just start drawing :)

http://mud.ladaponte.com/paforum/cad.jpg

later.

Hey, i like it. I thnk the grill should be streched more to the left at that angle. The elipses are at the right angle but make the front one wider. Other than that it's nice.

:)

Wheels are weird...It looks like the same wheels you put on your other concept(s).

indicate some evidence of other, passngr side, headlamp. where'd it go?

your wheels are a bit weak, but you will eventually get the hang of those.

you have a good imagination.

lighten up, or, rather, don't bear down to death your lines. it looks like you're trying to kill someone. loosen up and let it flow out. use more graceful strokes with your whole arm.

I like it except for the grill. It looks too old school for this design, and you need to clean up the drawing a bit. I personally think the wheels are cool. They look like the general style for hotwheels.