slidenride

becausethe picture was in two seperate pieces and put together in photoshop.Bonzelite i liked your last review and expect nothing but absolute brutality...if your criticism of this picture does not surpass your earlier review i shall be sorely disappointed..oh yes others criticism also welcomed

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Mshkttck

Wow. That's great! I like the way you used the lines to create a motion effect to the drawing, and the reflections are great!

castback

i don't really like the lines...maybe its because there is so many different colors...i don't know. its a great drawing but the front wheel seems small. good job.

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Hieveryone

looks great.....but the front wheel seems a little small i think.

SeCrEtMoDdEr

front and back wheel are off.

BuLLDoGG

nice drawing, but the wheels don't look that nice

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slidenride

i know some may not like that halo effect but it has to be there thats the anime bit...about the tyres ...i realise this isnt really a biker forum but they actually are like (front wheel small) that..the front wheel is at a different angle beecause this wheelie was done coming out of a corner...im not trying to defend my drawing...just a bit of info

HighOctaneNOSUser

hey I am a bike type guy, and I know what your saying man. I personally don't think that the halo does much for the drawing. but other than that you are correct about the bikes tires...Your lines look a little wavy tho, so work on that...

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tanner07

I think the wheels look great Good job on the whole thing

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bonzelite

slide, i haven't checked my pm's latetly. now i have. give me a bit to crit this piece. i'm busy today.

GTmike400

Take your time, hes on a "vacation".

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bonzelite

first thing is front wheel is too small.

guy's leg seems extremely small.

in general it is good.

i will have more for you later.

work on those things first.

bonzelite

oh. now i get it.

mmmkay.

slide, you need to really cool it, buddy.