Hey guys, here's a first attempt at a car since i was 10 in pencil. feedback please.


http://i67.photobucket.com/albums/h289/fundanmental/lanciastratos.jpg





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Great work! All I can say about it just put alittle more detail into it(interior mainly) and rear wheel but yea great. Love the tires.

Great rendering, body looks awesome...2 things
1. glass has more shine than paint...add more contrast
2. back wheel/tire is small and out of proportion

looks good i like that red .

back tire looks too small

Your body perspective is right on! I'll bet those hood louvers took awhile eh? I don't wanna sound like a scratched record, but work on the rear wheel a bit. However, nice job overall! B

thanks for all the great feedback. very useful. those hood thingys did take ages and i can see that the perspective isnt quite right. it was really hard to get the spacing between them, the diminishing sizes due to perspective and at the same time show the curve of the bonnet. u would have to spend a couple of hours on them alone i think.

gonna go practice

Very nicely done. and yes, the only major problem is the back wheele.