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Clk-Gtr


nicecar
09-07-2005, 12:30 PM
I did this is a quickie for a mate, since he liked my drawings so much :)

it is a Mercedes Clk-Gtr done completely in pencil, with a small(very!)
reference.

http://img107.imageshack.us/img107/3047/camcool8rt.jpg

i want C+C please, since i need to improve on freehand

-chris :jump3:

knightvision
09-07-2005, 02:03 PM
The cartoon is good, it just looks not really finished somehow.

You should try to make a more serious drawing of it. Try to use your pencils for shading, also. If you want to improve your freehand skills, you must try to draw a 1:1 copy of the car.

nicecar
09-07-2005, 02:24 PM
actually, the car was about a 2:1 copy since the ref was so small

thanks for the criticism, i need it

KARTOONZ
09-07-2005, 07:44 PM
I like it .Try a black outline on it ..it will bring your toon more alive.keep up the good work

lepain
09-08-2005, 04:42 AM
nice toon. Ive always loved the clkgtr.
try to loosen up and get more flowing lines onto the paper.

stuffbyalex
09-08-2005, 06:59 PM
Nice toon! I've always loved this car. Even though it's a toon and the proportions are supposed to be distorted, the angle of the windshield is looking a bit "un-aerodynamic" right now. Other than that, everything looks good!

Alex

69charger426
09-14-2005, 03:16 PM
the wheels and tires lack 3d and the caliper is to far down on the front brake, other then that its a good toon

jcsaleen
09-17-2005, 07:17 PM
Not to bad a little more crunched an it'l be fine...

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